Carnival

Hello, watcher here . I'll see if I can help improve your piece.

First and foremost, the colours are surprisingly muddy. Considering your bright ponies and liberal use of colours in them. It's weird to see a piece from you with such dull and boring browns and yellows. It makes the painting feel sombre despite it being a carnival. The highlights around the figures is slight overdone. could be toned down abit and maybe not pure white/teal for the fabric?

The light source behind could be more to the left? or right? whichever, just something not so dead center and also turned down. Feels like i'm having a seizure with all these blaring bright lights.

Which really doesn't work with the stark brown/black background. It's an interesting contrast just too much for my eyes.


The poses are stiff and unnatural. She's pointing at something, yet her body is still facing us? It's too symmetrical. and putting them right in the dead center like that, is not doing any favors for the composition, and how they are standing too, people don't stand like that unless they gotta whiz.

I'm not a fan of bikini armor either. though thats probably not your fault.

Alright! hope I helped! keep posting art.