Hello bronies~ Look at your girl, now back to me, now back at your girl, now back to me. sadly, she isn't me...but maybe if she stopped being so stuck up and started to study about friendship, she could act like me!~ Look down, back up, where are you? You're in Canterlot, with the mare your girl could act like. What's in your hand, now back at me, I have it, it's a scroll with a new friendship lesson written on it. Look again, the scroll is now two tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala!~ Anything's possible when your girl acts like a true friend and not a parasprite! I'm on a pony.~ F-f-f-f-f-f-Friendship!~
Hello colts. Look at your mare. Now back to me. Now back at your mare. Now back to me. Sadly, she is not me. But if she stopped using your body wash and switch to "Pony Spice", she could smell like she's me. Look down, back up! Where are you? You're on a boat with a mare a mare would smell like! What is in your hoof? Back at me; I have it! It's an oyster with two tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala. Look again, the tickets are now diamonds! Anything is possible when your mare smell like Pony Spice and not a colt. I'm on Big Mac. Eeyup! *Old Spice Whistle*
This was the first thing that popped in my head!! Nice job on it!
Chest-area aside, I'm finding a bit of a lack of detail in Twi's body compared to Mac, who looks really well done. Also she looks as thin as a rail, and this is coming from one of the skinniest people I know!