Ooh, Lyra as some kind of primal hunter, sweet! Is this inspired by something or just pulled from the artistic aether at random?
I like the chest plate version better but both are good. My problem with this one isn't the nakedness, but rather how much the bare chest clashes with clashes with her otherwise heavily armored limbs. A fully unarmored version could be interesting though, with an almost Na'vi of Avatar feel.