You nailed her shape right away, and the colouring fit her perfectly
Only thing im a bit... well... uncomfy with is: the eyes. Or more precisely: the direction of the eyes. Tho the glowy sphere in front of her distracting a bit from it, it looks like her right eye (for us on the left) is either pointing up a bit too much or her pupil (same eye) is a bit too small. Last case is the more likely, if i look at the size of her iris. To me, as i have to deal with issues all around the eye for my living, it looks a bit like she has a minor Hypertropia [link] (vertical upwads squint error) or a pupil offset on the right eye. And it's not a matter of perspective. Even turning or tilting her in any direction would make no effect.