realy grat work! pretty warm... may be hot. i do like your work a lot. this in particular it's to fuzzy, in particular her face, there is no detail to stare deeply. perhaps, with other eye color, something red or green (particularly green) make more blatant. other point is the light, on the pony looks yellow and cozy while the sky lights are blue and fresh. a dawn sky or a sunset will make a better complemen. also a palm tree and seagulls will give some life to the sky. and one or two element in de sand, like buckets and spades or suntan in purple, pink or any cold color will cut a little with the heat of the sand. i hope be usefull and don't reiterated. P.D: i really love your draw "Hail to the Swarm, baby!"